The Unseen (new revision :-)
4th stanza THE UNSEENGentle sounds ripple a roomjust after the start of a night.A silver moon applies a magic broomso this abode sparkles light.With music felt as mote highlights,low-key breezes of...
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Neice SuSanne, I love your writing. The stanza that really touched my heart I quote below.Quote:For what is a writer's life without a muses appeaseto heartily and joyfully peruse beyond routine?To...
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Ah Auntie W,Sometimes I wonder if I would be a writerof words without you, JimDa, MoM and SammieSisamongst so many others as those of this boardand from this board and also with the inspirationyou all...
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Sounds like its going to be a fun night SuSanne. Enjoyed this lighthearted, though for me, multi layered poem.Regards,Maryse
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Ah Maryse ~ You found me out. Even when I lighthearted, I have the tendency to bemulti-layered. I guess it just goes withthe territory yet am I glad, you enjoyed. Thanks, Susanne
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reading the unseen my lovely relying on instinct is natures way. What is not said is often more important than what is said and the ability to read between the lines is a precious gift
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Ivor ~ ah yes, you are so correct and how fortunate am I that you are amongst so manyhere who have that natures instinct Thank you dear Sir. ah dan ~ what a happy sigh this morn you have given mewith...
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The poet steps in to write his song of things he's seen and things he longsto be in place before he dies the death of one who can't decideto keep his feet upon the ground; to live as one who has been...
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SuSanne, keep "pursuing beyond the routine". It makes life much more interesting. Verly well done, indeed.shelbyMetric feet with rhythmic beatwill keep in step with time,to make an imprint where they...
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I especially like the delightful Moon's magical broom!
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dan ~ that you came back in to leavea glorious write as your "The Poet Steps In"touches deeply without a double entrendre.Hugs for this delight...smiles, me Shelby ~ I cannt tell you how much your...
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Sus-Daught under any circumstances, you would still be a writer, you were born with that talent, and you constantly improve on it, sooooooooooooo................WRITE ON!!JimDaClick here to go to...
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its amazing what you hear when you listen to the breeze!
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JimDa ~ 2nd round of hugs for your 2nd coment Willow ~ well blush, the breeze told me to revisionagain, so I did. And aye, you are so correct.Thanks you two!!!Susanne
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